As some of the comments said, very good game, English needs a bit of work. Maybe you guys can get some beta readers, before the chapter officially releases? (Chic(a)s creo que es mejor tener beta readers, que el sistema que le mencionan a la persona de abajo, lo de los screenshots puede ser muy tardado).
Hola, Okio, es nuestra intención abrir algún tipo de propuesta para beta readers angloparlantes, pero de momento no podemos hacernos cargo porque nuestro calendario de publicaciones es muy ajustado y porque aún tenemos una audiencia 'limitada'. Pero es el escenario ideal, poder testear las traducciones con al menos 5 días de antelación.
The first chapter was nice, the English translation is not very good. Also, the chapter was very short, which is not a bad thing! But I felt like I didn't see all of the characters as much as I'd like. I think there is room for improvement, and I really do think his game has potential. I'll be looking forward for future updates and development, I really do hope it'll get better with time. Best of luck to the team!
Hi! Thank u for the comment. If you have time and want to help improve the translation, we'd ask you to send us some screenshoots with the mistakes in our email. English isn't our first lenguage and sometimes we can't see the problems. The idea for the game is for it to have more chapters, and to get to know the characters little by little playing all of them, and for that we need to make them a little shorter. Anyway, the next script is a little bit longer ;). We're working very hard for the october update. Wait for us!
A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
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As some of the comments said, very good game, English needs a bit of work. Maybe you guys can get some beta readers, before the chapter officially releases? (Chic(a)s creo que es mejor tener beta readers, que el sistema que le mencionan a la persona de abajo, lo de los screenshots puede ser muy tardado).
Hola, Okio, es nuestra intención abrir algún tipo de propuesta para beta readers angloparlantes, pero de momento no podemos hacernos cargo porque nuestro calendario de publicaciones es muy ajustado y porque aún tenemos una audiencia 'limitada'. Pero es el escenario ideal, poder testear las traducciones con al menos 5 días de antelación.
The first chapter was nice, the English translation is not very good. Also, the chapter was very short, which is not a bad thing! But I felt like I didn't see all of the characters as much as I'd like. I think there is room for improvement, and I really do think his game has potential. I'll be looking forward for future updates and development, I really do hope it'll get better with time. Best of luck to the team!
Hi! Thank u for the comment. If you have time and want to help improve the translation, we'd ask you to send us some screenshoots with the mistakes in our email. English isn't our first lenguage and sometimes we can't see the problems. The idea for the game is for it to have more chapters, and to get to know the characters little by little playing all of them, and for that we need to make them a little shorter. Anyway, the next script is a little bit longer ;). We're working very hard for the october update. Wait for us!
It´s a nice game! Congratulations to the Creator of the game.
Buena ambientación, buena historia, grandes escenarios. Se nota el trabajo. Muy bien introducido el mundo!
Waiting for the next episode!
Gracias, ¡Eres muy amable! Esperamos poder mantener la calidad y traeros actualizaciones mensuales.
A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
Thank u for your honesty, we are starting and need this too. If you want feel free to share some screenshot of the bugs in our email. ^^
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
Oh no! Its perfectly fine. It's totally readable and I love it!
This looks awesome! Is this a demo, episode, or the full game?
This is the first episode, we hope to update new episodes soon (in a month, if possible). Thank u so much!