I'm liking your game so far. The music is my absolute favorite. And I think I'm falling head over heels for Hasiel. In fact, I want to hug Hasiel so bad right now. After all, Hasiel looks so cute and cuddly. 🤗😘
However, I love that this game makes me think more about angels. Since angels are always portrayed as good, I thought that angels were nothing to be afraid of. But I believe that was wrong of me to think, as we know truly nothing about angels. And I don't think our stories or myths about angels are accurate, so relying on those tall tales wouldn't be such a smart move on our part. I think the best thing for us is to not trust anyone. 😌
I don't trust Coco or Doughy. I believe the woman from our dreams is being held prisoner in Coco's laboratory. I think that Coco is experimenting on her, trying to use her as a way to provide a cure for all ailments mankind suffers. 🧐🤨
I see an improvement with the English translation, but I still spot some errors here and there. If you can please add a skip option for seen texts, I would greatly appreciate it. I'm asking this because I believe having a skip option would make it easier for people to try different routes.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And I hope we're one step closer to solving the mystery. 😄
Hasiel can be a little dark sometimes, but usually he’s a ray of sunshine. We can’t wait to dig more into all the characters.
We like playing with the idea that there’s not ‘good’ or ‘bad’ characters, and letting the players freely decide who deserves their trust. We hope to achieve that effect, as we are true advocates of the characters with grey areas.
We try to do our best with the english, we now have a wonderful beta reader, but still some things can go unnoticed. We don’t have a omision button as such, but if you hit the ‘ctrl’ key you can skip part of the text ^^. I hope this tip can help you in the future ^^.
We are already working on the next update, we hope to be back soon and thank you for supporting us.
i like the artstyle, especially the spites, they are very detailed and wll-drawn. interesting music choice
great lore. meaninful choices, morality system and some character customisation. The story takes place in dystopian, violent, brutal world but most people are not evil and it possible to survive. plot is good, too.
interesting characters. Arael is my favourite. So cute, and pure and good. i chose to be good and I hope all angels will like my company
We’re happy to know you’re liking the story and the morality system. We’ve a nice beta reader who’s helping us improve the english for the next updates.
We’re uploading a new update in a few days, so keep an eye cause soon there’ll be a new chapter.
As some of the comments said, very good game, English needs a bit of work. Maybe you guys can get some beta readers, before the chapter officially releases? (Chic(a)s creo que es mejor tener beta readers, que el sistema que le mencionan a la persona de abajo, lo de los screenshots puede ser muy tardado).
Hola, Okio, es nuestra intención abrir algún tipo de propuesta para beta readers angloparlantes, pero de momento no podemos hacernos cargo porque nuestro calendario de publicaciones es muy ajustado y porque aún tenemos una audiencia 'limitada'. Pero es el escenario ideal, poder testear las traducciones con al menos 5 días de antelación.
The first chapter was nice, the English translation is not very good. Also, the chapter was very short, which is not a bad thing! But I felt like I didn't see all of the characters as much as I'd like. I think there is room for improvement, and I really do think his game has potential. I'll be looking forward for future updates and development, I really do hope it'll get better with time. Best of luck to the team!
Hi! Thank u for the comment. If you have time and want to help improve the translation, we'd ask you to send us some screenshoots with the mistakes in our email. English isn't our first lenguage and sometimes we can't see the problems. The idea for the game is for it to have more chapters, and to get to know the characters little by little playing all of them, and for that we need to make them a little shorter. Anyway, the next script is a little bit longer ;). We're working very hard for the october update. Wait for us!
A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
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I'm so glad you updated. 😊
I'm liking your game so far. The music is my absolute favorite. And I think I'm falling head over heels for Hasiel. In fact, I want to hug Hasiel so bad right now. After all, Hasiel looks so cute and cuddly. 🤗😘
However, I love that this game makes me think more about angels. Since angels are always portrayed as good, I thought that angels were nothing to be afraid of. But I believe that was wrong of me to think, as we know truly nothing about angels. And I don't think our stories or myths about angels are accurate, so relying on those tall tales wouldn't be such a smart move on our part. I think the best thing for us is to not trust anyone. 😌
I don't trust Coco or Doughy. I believe the woman from our dreams is being held prisoner in Coco's laboratory. I think that Coco is experimenting on her, trying to use her as a way to provide a cure for all ailments mankind suffers. 🧐🤨
I see an improvement with the English translation, but I still spot some errors here and there. If you can please add a skip option for seen texts, I would greatly appreciate it. I'm asking this because I believe having a skip option would make it easier for people to try different routes.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And I hope we're one step closer to solving the mystery. 😄
Hasiel can be a little dark sometimes, but usually he’s a ray of sunshine. We can’t wait to dig more into all the characters.
We like playing with the idea that there’s not ‘good’ or ‘bad’ characters, and letting the players freely decide who deserves their trust. We hope to achieve that effect, as we are true advocates of the characters with grey areas.
We try to do our best with the english, we now have a wonderful beta reader, but still some things can go unnoticed. We don’t have a omision button as such, but if you hit the ‘ctrl’ key you can skip part of the text ^^. I hope this tip can help you in the future ^^.
We are already working on the next update, we hope to be back soon and thank you for supporting us.
i like the artstyle, especially the spites, they are very detailed and wll-drawn. interesting music choice
great lore. meaninful choices, morality system and some character customisation. The story takes place in dystopian, violent, brutal world but most people are not evil and it possible to survive. plot is good, too.
interesting characters. Arael is my favourite. So cute, and pure and good. i chose to be good and I hope all angels will like my company
I'm waiting for next chapters :D
we’re so grateful you are liking our game, we put a lot of effort in it, even if there’s still a lot to improve.
We are sure if you chose to be coherent everything will be fine with the angels, specially with Arael. She’s all innocence and purity.
In a few days (if everything goes fine) there’ll be a new chapter >_<
Thank you for supporting us!!
Hi!
I'm really enjoying your game so far. The story is very interesting. And I like how the player's choices can alter the story for the better or worse.
The English translation needs a bit of work. But I'm sure you guys can improve along the way. 😊
I look forward to the next chapter. 😃
Hi, Candy_Curse ^^
We’re happy to know you’re liking the story and the morality system. We’ve a nice beta reader who’s helping us improve the english for the next updates.
We’re uploading a new update in a few days, so keep an eye cause soon there’ll be a new chapter.
I quite enjoyed the story. You definetely have your own style and I would like to see the story to the end.
Best wishes and good luck!
P.S.: When will I see the Can again? It was my favorite ;-P
Thank u so much, we hope we can end the story, but not in the near future.
P.S.: You'll probably see The Can at the end of chapter 5. (Little spoiler ;D)
As some of the comments said, very good game, English needs a bit of work. Maybe you guys can get some beta readers, before the chapter officially releases? (Chic(a)s creo que es mejor tener beta readers, que el sistema que le mencionan a la persona de abajo, lo de los screenshots puede ser muy tardado).
Hola, Okio, es nuestra intención abrir algún tipo de propuesta para beta readers angloparlantes, pero de momento no podemos hacernos cargo porque nuestro calendario de publicaciones es muy ajustado y porque aún tenemos una audiencia 'limitada'. Pero es el escenario ideal, poder testear las traducciones con al menos 5 días de antelación.
The first chapter was nice, the English translation is not very good. Also, the chapter was very short, which is not a bad thing! But I felt like I didn't see all of the characters as much as I'd like. I think there is room for improvement, and I really do think his game has potential. I'll be looking forward for future updates and development, I really do hope it'll get better with time. Best of luck to the team!
Hi! Thank u for the comment. If you have time and want to help improve the translation, we'd ask you to send us some screenshoots with the mistakes in our email. English isn't our first lenguage and sometimes we can't see the problems. The idea for the game is for it to have more chapters, and to get to know the characters little by little playing all of them, and for that we need to make them a little shorter. Anyway, the next script is a little bit longer ;). We're working very hard for the october update. Wait for us!
It´s a nice game! Congratulations to the Creator of the game.
Buena ambientación, buena historia, grandes escenarios. Se nota el trabajo. Muy bien introducido el mundo!
Waiting for the next episode!
Gracias, ¡Eres muy amable! Esperamos poder mantener la calidad y traeros actualizaciones mensuales.
A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
Thank u for your honesty, we are starting and need this too. If you want feel free to share some screenshot of the bugs in our email. ^^
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
Oh no! Its perfectly fine. It's totally readable and I love it!
This looks awesome! Is this a demo, episode, or the full game?
This is the first episode, we hope to update new episodes soon (in a month, if possible). Thank u so much!