A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
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It´s a nice game! Congratulations to the Creator of the game.
Buena ambientación, buena historia, grandes escenarios. Se nota el trabajo. Muy bien introducido el mundo!
Waiting for the next episode!
Gracias, ¡Eres muy amable! Esperamos poder mantener la calidad y traeros actualizaciones mensuales.
A lot of cool, unique ideas. But the English translation needs a lot of editing. Most of the meaning got across, but the flow was choppy. Some noun adjectives (car red), when it should be adjective noun (red car), for example. I hope this doesn't discourage you. Best of luck to the team!
Thank u for your honesty, we are starting and need this too. If you want feel free to share some screenshot of the bugs in our email. ^^
This is really good! Just a few spelling mistakes here and there in the English 1st episode. I really hope you update soon! Hasiel is definitely. my favourite.
Oh, thank u for the comment. We're very grateful (and Hasiel too). If you want (It's only a suggestion), you might share a few screenshots of bugs in our email and we promise to correct in the next updates. We aren't english native and we have a few fails ^^U
Oh no! Its perfectly fine. It's totally readable and I love it!
This looks awesome! Is this a demo, episode, or the full game?
This is the first episode, we hope to update new episodes soon (in a month, if possible). Thank u so much!